berumen- group comments

Smith- idea #1 and #5 seem to be the most interesting- if you do #5, be careful with how you place the items within the crocodile. Also, this book has a lot of potential in terms of the style of illustration/imagery......i would suggest you go in a realistic(surrealistic) direction.

McCain- your quilt idea is much better than your pea circle jacket. Try using more interesting imagery than just the 20 mattresses. Sorry, but the pea idea was just too typical.

James, Megan- i think you should combine your text heavy concept with your telescreen idea. Try to implement a harsh propaganda/oppression theme. You have some good ideas to work off of.